Hello, everyone! I'm glad to be here to share my dream with you. I want to be an English teacher, and I am going to work and live in Beijing.(開篇總述理想職業(yè)及生活和工作的地點(diǎn),引出下文)
First, English is becoming more and more useful and important and being an English teacher is exciting, too. If I am an English teacher, I can help my students with their English study. Second, I like being with children because it makes me feel young. Lastly, Beijing is the capital of China. I can meet many English speakers and I can improve my English by communicating with them. (運(yùn)用 first, second 和 lastly 分層描述了選擇此職業(yè)及生活和工作在北京的原因,條理分明、脈絡(luò)清晰)
To make my dream come true, I will study English hard every day and speak English as often as possible. I will do more listening in the morning. I'm sure I,'ll love my job and students.(動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語的使用為文章增色不少)
No pain, no gain. I believe as long as I try my best, my dream will come true some day. (使用諺語結(jié)尾;字跡工整)