We started at 9:00a.m.(點(diǎn)明出發(fā)時(shí)間) It was sunny and we could see the blue sky and white clouds.(點(diǎn)明天氣狀況)We also saw lots of beautiful flowers along the way. We played in the water and sang loudly with the birds. After three hours, we got to the top. The city looked really wonderful from the top and we took quite a few photos.(表達(dá)靈活，描述要點(diǎn)三的過程中自然地提及要點(diǎn)四;描述了要點(diǎn)三的全部活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，表達(dá)流暢、有條理;有適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)發(fā)揮)We all felt very tired, but it was really a relaxing and interesting trip.(描述活動(dòng)感受)
