Thursday, 20 June
Today our class had a charity walk（舉行了慈善行走）. The purpose of this activity is to donate money（籌錢） to students in poor areas. During the event, participants covered行走（一段路程） the 10 km route in three hours, handing out（分發(fā)） leaflets to promote宣傳 the charity. In the end, our school collected（募集） more than 10,000 yuan.
I think it's really a wonderful experience. I'm proud of（對(duì)……感到驕傲） myself for what I have done. I hope more and more people will join us and do something for those children.
本文要求寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)校舉行的慈善行走的日記。文章按照寫作要點(diǎn)分別寫了活動(dòng)的目的、過(guò)程、結(jié)果和感受。文章包含了所有的要點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容完整、句意通順，層次清晰、有邏輯。文章用了大量地道的短語(yǔ)和句型，為文章增色不少。
短語(yǔ)和句式積累：
① have a charity walk 舉行慈善行走
② donate money 籌錢
③ hand out leaflets 分發(fā)傳單
④ be proud of 對(duì)……感到驕傲
