The Special Olympics World Games give children and adults with intellectual disabilities a chance to show their skills to the world.
I was lucky to(幸運(yùn)做某事) volunteer for the Games in Shanghai in 2007. All the volunteers received training(接受訓(xùn)練) before doing the task. Then we provided support(提供支持) for the athletes. I was a swimming coach for a young boy from North China. He tried his best and finished fourth(獲得第四名) in the competition. He felt more confident about himself. I think it was great to work with these athletes and help them achieve their dreams(實(shí)現(xiàn)他們的夢(mèng)想). It was an amazing experience of my life.
本文講述了自己成為志愿者前接受訓(xùn)練、給運(yùn)動(dòng)員提供支持、運(yùn)動(dòng)員取得的成績(jī)以及自己的感想。文章句意通順,層次清晰、有邏輯。文章用了大量地道的短語(yǔ)和句型,為文章增色不少。
短語(yǔ)/句式積累:
① give sb. a chance to do sth. 給某人一個(gè)做某事的機(jī)會(huì)
② be lucky to do sth. 做某事很幸運(yùn)
③ volunteer for … 為……做志愿者
④ provide support 提供支持
⑤ finish fourth 獲得第四名
⑥ achieve one's dream 實(shí)現(xiàn)某人的夢(mèng)想