Jim is my friend. His/Her birthday is on the first of June. He/She usually has a birthday party at home. Many friends come to his birthday party. They bring a birthday cake and eat the cake together. After that, he plays games with them. They all have a good time.
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1. His birthday is on the first of June.
注意日期的表達(dá)格式:the+序數(shù)詞+of+月份。
2. He usually has a birthday party at home.
注意頻率副詞的使用:always, usually, often...
3. After that, he plays games with them.
句子之間的銜接:after that,表達(dá)“在...之后”。